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the soul

October 3, 2013
By stackhouse BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
stackhouse BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
champions wear bruises with pride!


Understand, I am always trying to figure out what the soul is,
And where hidden and what shape
I am still wondering what happened when you
Step past the line

What am I going to see? Will I get a chance to prove I am a good person, and a
Greater presence, will I get the chance to prove
How balanced I could be. How
Amazing I could be, is my soul worth a
Chance in the first place. I think it is understand, I am
Always trying to figure out
What my soul is, and when I do, that will be the end of my story
And all would have been written.


The author's comments:
1. Decisions I made based upon this poem was how I really wanted something to kind of describe who I am. Know what I am thinking deeper within my thought, i did the length of the stanza because I wanted to make the poem look a little different and spaced out so that people pay attention to the lines. I did not use any lines but did use description.
2. My writing has changed because in this poem I was able to free-style say what I wanted to say. Be able to have something related to me and show how my actual writing can be. I still can tweak a little better but I wanted to give a little less that way I don’t get off topic. I Did change a couple of words around to make it sound a little more better

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