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Last goodbye

July 24, 2013
By Angel-freed PLATINUM, Dallas City, Illinois
Angel-freed PLATINUM, Dallas City, Illinois
20 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is our true meaning, so show it. Don't be sad because its over, be happy because it happened. -Dr. Seuss; "Pooh will we be friends forever?" asked Piglet, "Even longer." Pooh replied. -Winnie the Pooh

I feel the most power
With the door shut and going deep with the first cut
Laying on the cold tile with tear stains on my face and blood covering my arms
This is where I feel power over my pain and my life
My arms only show half the scars I know
Maybe this is the day, take the final jump, final cut, and end the pain
Maybe I’ll come back
As a bird in the sky proud and soaring
Or maybe a flower among the grass grounded and blooming
Or I’ll just rot away and only be a forgotten name
I hope you find my letter in time
So you can hear my last goodbye.


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on Nov. 1 2013 at 4:10 pm
holls925 BRONZE, Liverpool, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"When I was at school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote 'happy'. They told me I didn't understand the assignment, and I told them they didn't understand life."
-John Lennon

The first few words of this poem drew me in and wanted me to carry on reading, you are amazing at making a person read on! Wow! :) 

on Nov. 1 2013 at 1:57 pm
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Favorite Quote:
Head up, stay strong. Fake smile, move on.

1 word: Wow! 

SuzieQ777 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 5:27 pm
SuzieQ777 GOLD, Franklin, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"La Vida Es Bella"


tiasa BRONZE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 12:20 pm
tiasa BRONZE, Howrah, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"To live would be an awfully big adventure" — Peter Pan


on Jul. 27 2013 at 11:04 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

Wow, this is powerful, deep and i can see your passionate. It has a sad but beutiful flow to it excellent job

on Jul. 26 2013 at 9:00 pm
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
26 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right"
I also have another "Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts"

WOW! The diction you used was so powerful and amazing. I was at a loss for words. So beautiful, but in a very sad way.

on Jul. 25 2013 at 2:45 pm
StarGazer9 GOLD, Marana, Arizona
19 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do."

Wow, this is powerful. I'm not even sure what to say right now...

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2013 at 10:07 am
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 405 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

this was so horribly moving. its beautifully written, but its just so sad:( if this is a true story, DONT DO IT.