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Tears that Created the Ocean

May 28, 2013
By Hol Seo SILVER, Queens, New York
Hol Seo SILVER, Queens, New York
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Covered in dirt, smutty t-shirt
This is not the life, so dark and covert.
I tried to hold on, but the tears came out.
Can you hear me world, the noise of my heart’s shout?
I want to be gold, I want to be silver.
But never ever, just cry me a river.
I want to be loved, give me the love potion.
No notion, such slow motion.
My tears came out, tears that created the ocean.



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on May. 29 2013 at 2:01 pm
JH2974-A SILVER, Sweet Home, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Happiness on earth ain't just for high achievers."- Ronnie Dunn

You use very diverse language.  I like how you stray away from the cliche, and your metaphors are pleasant.