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Untitled No. 2

May 15, 2013
By Anonymous

She intently stared at the street.
Looked both ways,
Like her mother always said.
Took a deep breath in.
It was time.
She began to cross the street,
The year's happenings
Causing each step to be harder than
The last.
She began to cross the street,
With no intention of reaching the
Other side.


The author's comments:
I believe we have all had this impulse before. To just walk into the road and end it all.

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on May. 23 2013 at 9:58 am
lifeaccordingtoawallflower BRONZE, Somewhere, Indiana
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“So, I guess we are who we are for a lot of reasons. And maybe we'll never know most of them. But even if we don't have the power to choose where we come from, we can still choose where we go from there."

Amazing. My heart ached as I read this. Great job. Try to use more descriptive words, though. Just trying to be constructive(: But for real, amazing job.