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Flames of Ecstasy

May 8, 2013
By Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy

The flames of ecstasy
overwhelm me so
But only when you’re here
And extremely close
My body begs for..
Your touch
It wants you near
It wants to hold you close
And whisper in your ear
My lips yearn for
Your touch
Just a second will do
But what my body really wants
Is a single night with you
At night when you sleep
My mind stays awake
And thinks
About what we could be doing
Making love together
Wishing it would last forever
The flames of ecstasy
Are fueled by my desire
It’s your body
That I admire
I love every inch
Every curve
Everything about you
Rocks my world
Your lips pressed softly
Against mine
Sends tingles of ecstasy
Down my spine
You truly are an angel
A creation of the divine
My body wants you
And I can no longer
Contain my desires
I need something to
Smolder the fires
Or else I might go insane
My body loves playing
These amazing love games
Intertwined are our bodies
Making love our new hobbies
We are so close
I can feel the heat
The heat of your fire
The ecstasy of your desire
Bending at your will
I’ll do anything to satisfy
Your needs
Anything to bring you to your
To send shudders of pleasure
Throughout your entire body
The image of sheer pleasure
You embody
My muscles tense as you let out
Sounds of ecstasy
With each moan
And each groan
The warmth of our fire
Circles us,
Engulfing us whole
Sending wave after wave
Of passion over our skin

The author's comments:
Contrary to popular believe this poem isn't just about making love. It has a deeper meaning, i tried expressing the emotions of true love and the connection between two people who really love each other. I think i did a pretty good job of portraying the intense closeness you feel when you are actually making love with someone that is your world.

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on Sep. 24 2013 at 3:32 pm
daRklovelyblue17 GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
13 articles 2 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where words fail, music speaks."

"I'm trying to believe in things that I don't know[...]That love can kill the pain, that truth is never vain, it turns strangers into lovers, and enemies to brothers"

Wow, this really does capture the intensity. Very well done. I loved it. Check out my stuff too?:) 

on Jun. 26 2013 at 4:12 pm
angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
24 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he'd learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.” -Jace Wayland City of Bones

this is very powerful, great work