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Dead End

March 26, 2013
By country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

Running down the lovely hall
Trying to escape the darkness,
As the dark night starts to fall.
My heart stops, as I hit the dead end,
Closing my eyes and pinches my skin,
Hoping that all of this is just pretend.
In the darkness, I hear the demons of the night come near,
I take a big gulp and tighten my fist,
Feeling my body shake, as my mind fills with fear.
I felt a cold hard hand on my shoulder
I whispered "Goodbye" as I knew my life was now over.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Jun. 17 2013 at 8:08 pm
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
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I am in love with this, every single word. Greaatttt job!:D

on Jun. 11 2013 at 8:42 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
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“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”

Wow! Its a great poem, it give an unusual feeling and its written in a flowing way!

on Apr. 27 2013 at 9:57 am
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
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The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Haunting and really good! :)

on Apr. 21 2013 at 8:00 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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This poem is so well done! It gave me shivers as I read it!