Betrayal | Teen Ink


March 6, 2013
By DoubttheCircles SILVER, Washougal, Washington
DoubttheCircles SILVER, Washougal, Washington
9 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep swimming, keep swimming, Heaven is just on the horizon.

The dagger deepens,
the heart beat slows,
her smile widens,
his eyes forever close.

The author's comments:
This short piece is a brief description to a girl whose had enough of her suffering and beating from a man. So instead of moping about her situation, she does something about it, killing the man who'd enslaved her as a pet. Getting her revenge through betrayal.

This is inspired by the girls who have gone mad because of the suffering they'd been put through by another human being.

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necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2013 at 11:55 am
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

shor yet very deep,ilike it