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Suicide

January 22, 2013
By BJBlazin BRONZE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
BJBlazin BRONZE, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let life's obstacles keep you from living your dreams.


Her fingers are always aching.
Her body is always shaking.
Her boyfriend has just dumped her.
Now her heart is slowly breaking.

It's too much for her to handle.
She can hardly even bare it.
She's in a whole other world,
She's about to just lose it,
and she cant even control it.

The doctor wonders why,
She's been through such a tragic dream.
Maybe it's because her head,
was full of terror and full of steam.

She started losing her mind.
She tried counting down the time,
until her father would get home,
to see his daughter losing her mind.

Damn son of a b****, didn't know his daughter was hurt.
She grabbed a salami knife,
and pointed it at her throat.
then started writing a letter called her suicidal note.

Her dad finally got home.
Right in the nick of time,
before his daughter could even write,
even a single dime.

He asked her about the knife.
Her words couldn't come out.
Then he finally got her to confess,
what the mess was about.

Poor girl had no pride.
Couldn't decide who was on her side.
Then told her dad she was sorry,
that she had intentionally lied.

But she finally got some help.
Wanted a perfect line of health.
But man she was really scared,
That nobody had really cared.

But she's all good now.
She's a beautiful and loving mother.
She now knows she's got protection,
from the lord up above.


The author's comments:
I've heard a lot about teen suicide. There's been about 4,400 people who have committed suicide or at least tried. I want to explain to people who don't understand about suicide and it's seriousness. I love helping people with their problems especially relating to suicide or depression. Just the smile on their faces after I cheer them up gives me the satisfaction of being a better person. I've learned that everyone deserves to live their lives to the fullest, because we're all gods gifts. We're all beautiful in our own ways. So if you ever feel the need to harm yourself, let me know and I'll explain it to you in poetry.

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