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Spin Me A Lie

September 18, 2012
By TheDarkCryLove PLATINUM, Cleator Moor, Other
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TheDarkCryLove PLATINUM, Cleator Moor, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"if you rush life, you are only rushing closer to death" - Anthony Cole
"it is what you read when you don't nead to, that determins what you will be when you can't help it" - Oscar wilde

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Crunch
The nicest feel beneath my feet
Plains, white as bone
A glimmer, reflecting the sun
As my army is ready

I raise my hand
That was the signal
Shining objects fly through the air
One by one they fall to the ground
Shivering

my friend got hit
It should have been me
I should have been falling
Falling on that harsh, cold ground
That shot was meant for me

I sought revenge
I picked my weapon off the ground
I met with him, my new nemesis
Kicked at the ground and blinded him
We both fire
I dodged, he never

everything is over-exaggerated
This happened, it was war
But it was only snow that shone
From sunlight in then air
But it was still my battle, and I !...
I will never lose

© Lindsey D., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
life is often exadurated, and this is my example, i am writing about a simple snow ball fight i remember from my youth.
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