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Oh Skies-Graceful Portrayer

June 12, 2012
By compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Oh Skies ,bright and elegant;
how thou instill serenity and hope in this quivered mind,
lined by infinity,smothered with delightful moods.
Thou stand high,
drawing a path to effervescence.

Oh Skies disquiet and dread,
lighting and thundering,
down pouring, letting it flow from your bosom.

Oh Skies mystic and ecstatic,
opulent with perspicacity:
shining with the shine conceived through every season that thou pass.

Oh Skies of wonders, how thou portray this soul so absolute.

Oh Skies painted with a tint of pink thither,
smeared with orange hither,brushed with red far and wide;
how beautifully thou recapture the memories.

The author's comments:
wrote this poem on a beautiful bright clouded noon.Hope you all understand how i relate myself with the skies of different seasons.If you need a summary please let me know in the comments section.Thank you :)

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This article has 18 comments.

on Jun. 18 2014 at 10:25 am
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
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"I'm OK, I'm Fine and I'm alright are the greatest lies people tell each other everyday." By Me.

Hi, compassion! here's my constructive and honest comment: I really like this but maybe you could use something else for the opening of the verses aside from Oh, skies. I just think it's a little repetitive but it's alright as it is.

on Feb. 25 2013 at 7:27 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

This was very beautiful!!! There was this time that I was travelling on flight n then we were passing into the day sky from the night sky... I felt soemthing like this!! wonderful poem!

on Sep. 28 2012 at 10:10 am
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

i love this one so powerful and yet so simple i love it

on Jul. 23 2012 at 1:41 am
Just-Another-Girl GOLD, Keighley, Other
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Favorite Quote:
- "A coward may survive...but a hero..a hero lives on in the hearts of the people he saved"

- "Words don't have the power to hurt people, unless the person who said it means a lot"

You say that love is nonsense. I tell you it is no such thing._

The poem is truly beautiful but i had to use a dictionary to know the meaning of some of them words... eah i'm dumb :p 

on Jul. 22 2012 at 4:08 am
Lovegoes2HATE BRONZE, Tecumseh, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am a dove

it was beautiful i hope this makes it

on Jul. 12 2012 at 11:38 pm
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
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that was so beautiful and well written and fantastic

on Jul. 12 2012 at 11:37 pm
Aeliss-Novak-the-Zombie-Space-Pirate BRONZE, That Place With All The Trees And Stuff, Oregon
1 article 3 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
Impossible is not a word, just a reason not to try.~Kutless

I'm going to smile and make you think I'm happy, I'm going to laugh, so you don't see me cry, I'm going to let you go in style, and even if it kills me - I'm going to smile.~Anonymous

I love it! And I don't even like poetry...

on Jul. 11 2012 at 9:00 am
TheLastShadowChaos BRONZE, Hohenwald, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 17 comments
this is really nice :)

on Jul. 11 2012 at 8:48 am
Dancergirl224 GOLD, Allen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
I Love You Now and Forever <3
I am always by your side.... I'm in your heart
you should be optimisticly pestimestic

beautiful wording and i love the raw emotions. Great job!

on Jul. 7 2012 at 12:35 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Beautiful wordings and full of raw emotions! Class! Keep it up!

on Jun. 28 2012 at 8:30 am
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates; You never know what you are gonna get.

So classical! Classical styles usually portray more emotion and they usually reach the audience. Yes, I like this. :D Keep it up!

BlackTalon said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 8:20 am
BlackTalon, School, Minnesota
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Very well written.  Some of those words are hard to make work, and make them work well, especially at the teenage level, well done.

on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:44 am
earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
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Favorite Quote:
You alone are enough. You don't have to prove yourself to anybody.
Trust dreams. Trust your heart. Trust your story.
Earth without trees is like pizza without cheese!!!
Humanity is like an ocean. If one drop gets polluted, the entire ocean doesn't.

Just the poem for a cloudy day!! Its beautiful!!!!!!!!

hypermagical said...
on Jun. 26 2012 at 4:44 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

I've never seen the words "hither" and "thou" used so well by a teen! Nice :)

on Jun. 24 2012 at 2:16 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them."

u have raptured my senses really.....this poem is like u can read it every day.....without boredom... and take in the blissful words jotted down by ur magical hands.... :)

on Jun. 24 2012 at 1:46 am
ACreativeMess SILVER, Shawnee, Kansas
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Amazing, you really have a talent! I hope to read more of your stuff in the future!!

on Jun. 24 2012 at 1:43 am
AyeshaLiveLaughLove BRONZE, Overland Park, Kansas
4 articles 1 photo 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today."
-James Dean

My jaw just dropped! An absolutely outstanding piece. You have captured the true beauty of simplicity in this amazing piece. Great work! 

on Jun. 24 2012 at 1:40 am
Pika_Princess, Escondido, California
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Beautifully written! The details were very vivid and I could easily imagine everything. I really loved your word choice. Amazing job!