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I hate you

March 7, 2012
By Yayagirl BRONZE, Green Bay, Wisconsin
Yayagirl BRONZE, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I was here",

I hate you
And your new girl
You are dumb,
And naïve
That’s all I can see
I thought that once we could be
Now that im gone,
I just can’t see,
The day you got down on one knee
And asked will you marry me?
The girl I once knew
Betrayed me and you
She stole someone,
I once knew…
It was you!
I should hate her,
Instead I hate you
For not believing I had you
I know there’s still amity,
But each day that I had faith
Tears rolled down my face
Once I realized that
Im miss you
I miss you so much
I hate you even more!

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on Mar. 10 2012 at 6:28 pm
MiaUnwritten GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Let the eyes seek what the mind cannot
Let the eyes judge what the mind cannot
Let the eyes believe what the mind failed to"

great, awesome, amazing, I especially know how you feel. It happened to me a while ago..

on Mar. 9 2012 at 12:21 pm
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a storm, so bring your umbrella."

great job! i loved that you could really tell what emotions you were having and where they were coming from. i have felt in a simpilar way recently, it was ironic your poem was the first one i clicked on to read, almost like a sign.. hey you're not a lone thing. keep writing!


on Mar. 9 2012 at 9:25 am
FK092495 SILVER, Crystal River, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
God could not be everywhere, therefore he created mothers.

You did a great job putting this emotional pathway together and im sure most of the people who reading it will agree with me when I say this. You have an amazing talent so keep up the great work and you shall find yourself to greater places with you writting! :)

LKR123 said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 10:17 pm
I think this poem describes perfectly the pain some people (most people) feel after a bitter break up. This is an example of great writing! Keep it up!