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A Tomboy's Valentine

February 10, 2012
By City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
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"I've known you for so long
I have this feeling
The feeling that we were meant to be"
My best friend said as we sit in his room

I stare from his bed
Unsure on what to say
"What i'm saying is this
I love more than just a sister"

For once in my life
I felt I didn't need to hide
I got up from my seat
And placed a kiss on his mud-streaked cheek

"I love you tooand always will
You've trusted no other girl
With the burden in your heart
Making me the perfect one for you"

He kisses my mud- streaked cheek
Before going to his closet
"I want you to wear this always then
But you find it lame"

I close my eyes and wonder
What valentine he got me
When I open my eyes and see
It's small and meaningful

"You now hold the key to my heart
Though it was my mother's before she died
As long as you wear this..."
I kissed him before he finished

"I shall always wear it forever
I'll never take it off
If only your mother was here to see this
But I'm sure she's glad that it is beloning to me"

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on Mar. 1 2012 at 9:49 am
FluteFreak SILVER, Auburn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Insanity just adds a little spice to life!" -Me

This seemed kind of sudden and choppy. I think you could make it better by adding more description of the people.