Heat me a Tear

January 28, 2012
By .king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Heat boil me inside
set peace free
to show the world
I'm back,
filming myself thoughts
pushing reality away
and finally it's true
while every sadness
and every sorrow
an eye-liner along my eye
ending it's beginning
roll down my cheek
heating me a tear
one droplet reflecting the earth
sizzle fearlessly
shifting into gas
steam rise gracefully
an incense's smoke
a dancer curling into the wind
celebrating death too soon
create me a scene
then the last of you
disappearing into the atmosphere
like, "love me leave me,
like the wind..."
opening to the world once more,
believing my relief, living in my tears !


The author's comments:
How a tear rolls down your and evaporates into freedom.

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AmericaniumJ said...
on Jun. 19 2015 at 7:36 pm
AmericaniumJ, Eureka, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Though she be but little, she is fierce!
-Shakespeare

The emotion is very powerful! Amazing work!

on Mar. 3 2014 at 2:48 pm
Shadow_Wolf GOLD, Mayfield Heigts, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not opening your eyes but opening your heart."
"You see not with your eyes, But with your heart."
"Think first with your heart not your head."
"If it has a heart, It is human."

I like this poem, but I couldn't pull the meaning out of it.... other than that , well done

on Feb. 24 2014 at 7:52 am
skydancer666 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
10 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
on my own i am clumsy ..... but on your shoulders i am free to be me

i like how you describe the poem keep up the good work!

.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 10:01 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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Umm, Thanks? ;D

.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 9:57 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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Sorry for the late reply (1 year late); Thank you for reading. I must say you are also an amazing writer! :D

.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 9:50 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thank you!  :D

.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 9:49 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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Thank you! And I haveto say that I agree about the lack of punctuation, this poem is quite old, I'll be sure to use more punctuation in the poems to come :D

Khaoula BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2013 at 6:09 pm
Khaoula BRONZE, Annaba, Other
2 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
" be you ... simply one of your kind "^_^

Such an amazing poem ... ! keep up with the good work .

on Nov. 28 2013 at 4:22 pm
thomakab14 SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whether you say you can or day you can't, you're right!

Never would have thought to  put heat and tears together, Genius! Wonderful style. I have nto say the lack of punctuation bugged me, but that's just personal preference. Write on! -Kaleb

on Feb. 14 2013 at 3:06 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I must say you are an amazing writer Silver! :) This is very well written and I am so glad to read more. And know if you ever need anyone to talk to I am here.

on Mar. 22 2012 at 8:05 am
Sweetwriter15 SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
6 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Well behaved women rarely make history

An amazingly well written piece, I can feel the emotions!

on Feb. 27 2012 at 1:51 am
king-raven BRONZE, Kelowna, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Buy the ticket, take the ride...and if it occasionally gets a little heavier than what you had in mind, well...maybe chalk it off to forced conscious expansion" Hunter S Thompson, Fear and Loathing In Las Vegas.

Really beautiful.. I like your writing style, it's unique!

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2012 at 12:03 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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Thanks so much Keep, Have a great 1 !

on Feb. 13 2012 at 10:03 am
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
49 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your mind fights the battles, but your heart wins the war." -Liz Ruth

This is a very beautiful piece. Very inspirational. I love your style of writting, and I love the part about the wind. Keep writting.

Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 3:42 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

it is something unique....

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:56 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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Thanks Cookie, I love your style of poetry too !

cookiestar said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 6:48 am
Wow. I love this. It's beautiful, unique and its so meaningiful, I love your style of writing:).

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 4:55 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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lol, Thanks White...

Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:57 am
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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i really like this silver!!

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:17 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thanks, I'm really happy that you appreciate my work, The more you read the better you write !




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