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Writing Worlds, While Building Dreams

January 19, 2012
By recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

She holds the pen in her hands
The key to take others to mystical lands
Her words flow across the plains
Through all her animals furry manes
Her letters form new worlds
As our perceptions are slowly swirled
She weaves together the story
A tale of love, A tale of glory
She throws in a dash of trouble
Loves mixture slowly begin to bubble
Her ink flies to and fro
As the flames continue to grow
She recounts of lovers past
Wanting one to truely last
As her ink starts to run dry
Tears flow as she begins to cry
A boy sits down with a paper
Breathing in her writings subtle vapor
He can see what she can't see
As his pen draws a bumble bee
The creature flies through the air
As a flower sprouts amidst her hair
His presence transforms the dream
His roots strengthening her story's seams
She writes as he draws
Their readers quieting with sudden awe
They've built this whole world together
There words connecting like birds of a feather

The author's comments:
I wrote this for someone special, who appears to be in conflict over whether or not they should continue writing! All I got to say is don't stop! You're too good to quit :)

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This article has 4 comments.

on Feb. 4 2012 at 9:51 pm
Sofia_Sorabella SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
A word is a bud attempting to become a twig. How can one not dream while writing? It is the pen which dreams. The blank page gives the right to dream.
- Gaston Bachelard

This is really good! I felt this girls sorrow and the connection they made. This is truly amazing! I love it.

on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:15 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

I will say it again! I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:19 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
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That touched me, every line was so cleverly amazing, I couldn't pick which line was the best, my massage for you Recurring...Never stop writing !

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:05 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! absolutely amazing! i love the title. keep up the awesome work!