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The Honest Thoughts Of A "Good" Guy

January 13, 2012
By WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

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Twinkle, twinkle little star.
Take my hand, take me far.
Cross my heart, and I hope to fly.
I promise you ‘til the day I die,
I’ll kiss each tear forever away.
Hold you closer, every day.
Maybe then, I hope you will see.
That you and I are meant to be.
Love is patient, love is kind.
It is written, yet it is blind.
At a loss for words, I begin to beam.
For now I see,
Forever is much longer than it seems.

© Yvette R., West Chester, PA

The author's comments:
I hate players. I am not one of them, and I always hear of how girls cannot find a "good" guy. Well, I am one of them, and this is exactly my thoughts on how I do treat any girl, that I call "mine". <3
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illusions GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 3:14 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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i hope so! great job btw!
illusions GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 3:12 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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haha thanks. great job!!!
WeAllBurn PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 11:04 am
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

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awhhh. You'll find one, I promise.
illusions GOLD said...
on Feb. 29 2012 at 10:42 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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i wish i knew a guy like u
WeAllBurn PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 11:50 am
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

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thank youuu (:
musicmissy SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 7:26 pm
musicmissy SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Luna3952 is right guys like you are awesome!
WeAllBurn PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 7:07 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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thank you so much!
Luna3952 SILVER said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 4:49 pm
Luna3952 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
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John 3:17

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This is soooo sweet!!! Keep writing!!! There needs to be more guys like you in this disappointing world!!