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The feel of freedom

December 1, 2011
By SammiD SILVER, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
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Aroma of burnt charcoal

Humid heat radiating my body

Burning sand running free
between my toes

Ice cold drinks rushing down
my throat

Cool crisp water clear like glass

Feeling free from everything
but the shinning star browning my skin

Sweat drops racing down my face

Crazy night that soon turn into calm Mornings

Freedom

Only 7 months away

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