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characteristics of love

September 10, 2011
By Neveah BRONZE, Hampton, Georgia
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Neveah BRONZE, Hampton, Georgia
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~he who angers you controls you ~ <br /> ~the only cure is surrender~

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Sensations flying...
feelings undeniable..
repel away from her

Her passion is hate ,
his is love ,
SOUL MATES.

He wants to love,
she wants to live
he fights ,
she wins ,
BRUTAL WAR.

They've been apart for too long,
to her its just like a love song
A FANTASY.

She's never loved ,
he's loved too much.
he wants to teach her
CHARACTERISTICS OF LOVE

The author's comments:
i hope that people will understand that with love its not always love at first sight, that sometimes you have to be taught how to love. Its hard to love someone if you don't know how. This poem shows how a guy is in love with a girl who doesn't know how to love, and he wants to teach her . This poem is about a girl who has been hurt before . She meets this guy who wants to love her and treat her good , but because of her past she wants nothing to do with him . Yet, he still fights, and eventually teaches her the characteristics of love.
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