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Completely Exposed MAG

July 22, 2011
By theintrovertmonologues DIAMOND, Pittsford, New York
theintrovertmonologues DIAMOND, Pittsford, New York
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The tissue sewn
to these bones
are wearing thin.
You peel back
layer after layer
relentlessly.
I feign distress
but I do not
want you to stop.
Because despite
all the gristle and
flexing muscle,
I have secretly
always wanted this.
I have always wanted
someone to take
the time and effort
to render me
completely exposed.
Oh look.
He's not really
all that bad
at all.



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on Apr. 12 2012 at 4:42 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Yeah I agree with Emmy88. It's incredible~ Makes a statement---we all "hide" from the world, in some way. But every once in a while, it's nice to have someone else see your inner shell.

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on Apr. 12 2012 at 1:21 pm
Emmy88 BRONZE, New Rochelle, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You miss 100% of the shots you don't take."-Wayne Gretzky

This poem is incredible. I loved it