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Remembering Us

May 16, 2011
By bandgeek4life_1117 BRONZE, Uniontown, Ohio
bandgeek4life_1117 BRONZE, Uniontown, Ohio
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It’s 11:11, my head on the pillow
I dream of us beneath the willow,
Lying next to you, holding your hand
As we listen to our favorite band.
I look and your eyes, more blue than the sea
And think, “ Do you feel the same for me?”
Then you kiss my lips, whisper my name
And assure me that you feel the same.

It’s 6:05, I get out of bed
And I still can’t get you out of my head.
I’m sorry for everything I’ve put you through
And all the ways that I have hurt you.
So now I say goodbye dear friend,
I really hope this isn’t the end.
And remember, no matter what you do,
I’ll always be here, I Love You.

The author's comments:
For an "old friend", going through some hard times.

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bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 7:39 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

i cried because this i relate to so well! this is great! i love it!

on Jun. 18 2011 at 7:54 pm
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

wow! this is a truly brilliant poem

i really love it

you really have a talent for writing

check out one of my poems sometime?