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Dear Girl at the Piano

May 11, 2011
By wespired GOLD, Circle Pines, Minnesota
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"God has given me the ability, the rest is up to me, believe... believe... believe." -- Billy Mills (Ox Lake 2008)

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Your song tugged at my heart.
as you gripped your hands around the string of my soul you spun me around.
Dizzy from Love I fell to the ground.
Lost in your deep brown eyes, only your voice could lift me up again.
Tipping over I realize I can't walk without you.
I can't breath without you
I can't sing without you
I can't live without you
Sing to me once more
Oh dear girl at the piano

The author's comments:
This girl I am writing about makes me feel weak all over. I only hope she could see how I feel about her, and I could only hope she knows that I have only pure intentions beyond my usual being.
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Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 10:14 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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my best advice: go 4 it! if she says no ok u get 2 mov on, if she says yes, yaay!! but honestly i think it hurts 2 keep dose feelins 2 urself :D
wespired GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 5:54 pm
wespired GOLD, Circle Pines, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God has given me the ability, the rest is up to me, believe... believe... believe." -- Billy Mills (Ox Lake 2008)

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That would be nice but she's sooo busy all the time. I'm afraid she'll just put me off and say I don't have time for a relationship right now.
wespired GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 5:53 pm
wespired GOLD, Circle Pines, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God has given me the ability, the rest is up to me, believe... believe... believe." -- Billy Mills (Ox Lake 2008)

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awww thanks. I think it would be too obviouse though. I came to this small singer song writer thing which she did and we were eye locked the whole time. It's just too strong possibly :(
Alexandrathepoet PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 9:41 pm
Alexandrathepoet PLATINUM, Leesville, South Carolina
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If nothing else, believe in art.
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This poem is truly beautiful, if the girl is smart, she'll see that too! Good luck!
Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 3:40 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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p.s. if u got anytime wat so ever plz check out my poems. even if u just read one. any feedback on how im doin is appreciated!!! thks
Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 3:38 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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awesome!! (leave da note 4 her anonymously!! :D )