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My Hidden Words

March 4, 2011
By Bubblybubbles223 PLATINUM, Warren, Oregon
Bubblybubbles223 PLATINUM, Warren, Oregon
24 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
people are like tomatoes...theyre red on the inside...and fun to smash...and especially fun to throw at walls. and clowns. and annoying teachers. and pirahnas cuz they say yuck cause theyre vegetables! ~me

Sometimes, there’s nothing to write about
And the only thing that gives you any inspiration
Is the blank page in front of you,
Waiting to be let out

Waiting to be painted, decorated
Perfected with your own words
Waiting to be alliterated
And to have purpose

Waiting for something to happen.
In your own life
That makes you want to write
About all your strife

A simple thought
A perfect design
The words that I’ve sought
I know that they’re mine

They’re mine alone
By themselves on this page
Adorned and bedecked
With my thoughts of rage…

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This article has 10 comments.

toria45 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 6:44 pm
toria45 BRONZE, Parma, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I dont need easy i need possible ~ Bethany Hamilton

omg this is like inspirational

on Apr. 10 2011 at 12:33 pm
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every burden is a blessing

love it and i can't stop reading becuz its so beautifully written.

on Apr. 9 2011 at 1:45 pm
3moh3art11639 SILVER, Fayetteville, North Carolina
6 articles 14 photos 10 comments
yep, yep, i understand its hard to write sometimes because you feel you've already written anything and everything you could write about. sometimes i just listen to music while sitting in front of my tons of notebooks, than hear a verse i really liked and write....

on Apr. 9 2011 at 10:18 am
Chacharoo BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
4 articles 4 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you."

This was good. This. Was good.

on Apr. 8 2011 at 2:02 pm
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
32 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

IMPRESSED!!!!  I loved it :D I could totally relate.  I'm glad you wrote this :D It is completely original and unique and I'm so glad I know others are out there :)  I wish I would've thought about this...Writing about having nothing to write about.  i think you have done an amazing job at making something so simple scream to be read.  Good job! KEEP IT UP!!!

Yours truly,


on Apr. 8 2011 at 12:22 pm
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
17 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

I feel the same problem this poem discusses often. when you feel the need to write and nothing comes to mind. I have also wrote poems about having nothing to say. great job

inactive said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 5:06 pm
inactive, Abc, Other
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments
I love both the topic and rhythm of this poem. I envy those who can rhyme so smoothly.

on Apr. 7 2011 at 11:17 am
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
44 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thus is life, live it, or die trying!

This is absolutly lovely, you grasp the feeling and put it into words in a beautiful way. Keep up the good work! ^_^

on Apr. 6 2011 at 11:04 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

very good! and i know that feeling. splendid

on Apr. 6 2011 at 3:05 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There's nothing to hold on to if it's already gone."

Wow... your writing style is amazing. Do the world a favor and keep writing! Super original too! 2 thumbs up! :)