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Bodies Without Boundaries

February 24, 2011
By lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

Bodies without boundaries
Boundaries without restrictions
Restrictions without curfew
Curfew without night
Night without darkness
Darkness without sound
Sound without music
Music without soul
Soul without purpose
Purpose without meaning
Meaning without cause
Cause without affect
Affect without scars
Scars without bruises
Bruises without wounds
Wounds without words
Words without letters
Letters without numbers
Numbers without calculations
Calculations without statistics
Statistics without facts
Facts without knowledge
Knowledge without brains
Brains without beauty
Beauty without bodies
Bodies without boundaries

The author's comments:
I wrote this in a really short amount of time. The words just had a way of flowing for me.

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This article has 8 comments.

TTTeeSS GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:18 am
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.

This was really good! I love this style and may have to try it myself.

Ariya GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 4:17 pm
Ariya GOLD, Charleston, South Carolina
12 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some men just want to watch the world burn.
-Alfred (Batman Begins)

It's really interesting and memorable. I did get confused and I had to read it twice to get it (but that's probably just me) good job!

Brooke M. said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 6:16 pm
It was definitely interesting, Had a good message.

on Jul. 18 2011 at 3:02 pm
Cause and Effect, you mean? I think it is good but it seems a little bit ranting... 

Dan_B SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 2:17 pm
Dan_B SILVER, Toronto, Other
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I like it. I think you meant cause and effect, though.

on Mar. 23 2011 at 5:05 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I love this!!!  Especially the way it all wrapped around to the beginning again!!!  That's so awesome!!! <3

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 1:09 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
I really liked it! but i just thought that something was missing though i don't know what was it ,, but it's good :)