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I See You, You See Me

January 23, 2011
By Nomi_1234 BRONZE, Little Elm, Texas
Nomi_1234 BRONZE, Little Elm, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"In his heart a man plans his course, but the Lord determines his steps."
~Proverbs 16:9~

I see you
In a white peasant shirt blowing in the wind.
Your eyes staring straight at me even though you are a field away.
The long field with green grass the height of your shins,
The height of my knees.
Your smile as always, is big and bright .
Your brunette locks being blown by the wind.
You are walking towards me in a pace not running,
but not completely walking
The moment is enchanting
I see you

You see me
In a blue dress, made of silk, the bottom trim and sleeves blowing in the wind,
You know I am staring at you with my blue eyes.
You see me smiling my natural smile,
And my blonde hair blowing around messily .
You are moving towards me,
Anticipating your approach to your best friend,
who was on the other side of the green pasture.
The moment is enchanting.
You see me

The author's comments:
I love the scene in the movie Pride and Prejudice where Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth meet at sunrise with the glorious sun shining between them. This what the inspiration for my poem.

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