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counting on you

January 11, 2011
By Luckylucky GOLD, Hartford, Connecticut
Luckylucky GOLD, Hartford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
''be nice to others,everyone is fighting their own battles''
''only people who risk going far,know how far they can go''
''what have you done to make your life better?''


I am a flower that blooms with love
from a bud to the flower i am today
you were with me the whole way
theres nothing else in this world world i can ask for

i remember when i didn't have a place to stand
you were there to hold my hand
you always turned my frown to a smile
your heart is soft and warm just like the morning sunrise

when i was about to fall and give up
you told me to keep holding on
and soon enough you gave me a helping hand
and pulled me up to what i am today

every time i looked behind myself
i saw you standing there smiling up to me
showing me that even if i trip and fall
you would always be there to hold me

from a toddler to the mature girl i am today
you were with me the whole way
thanks for your warm love and tender care
you fill my eyes with tears of joy, theres just one thing i want to say "thanks a lot for letting me count on you.......I LOVE YOU"



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on Apr. 3 2012 at 3:52 pm
thalialisset SILVER, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge Its Book By It's Cover

Your sooo welcome <3 ^_^

on Apr. 2 2012 at 5:11 pm
Luckylucky GOLD, Hartford, Connecticut
13 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
''be nice to others,everyone is fighting their own battles''
''only people who risk going far,know how far they can go''
''what have you done to make your life better?''

hank you thalia <3

on Mar. 30 2012 at 7:42 pm
thalialisset SILVER, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge Its Book By It's Cover

awesome poem!!!.......... <3