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Alive Again

September 2, 2010
By Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow


Taking my time
Soaking it in
Taking a breath
To give this a chance

Wishing for dreams
Letting them pass
Wishing to remember
All the we had

Moving along
Holding my breath
Moving right through
To a world without you

Becoming a new girl
Leaving the old
Becoming alive again
In the face of it all



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Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 9:53 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

This was an optimistic, energizing poem that really made me happy. Great job!

Megan.J.B said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 10:04 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
0 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here's the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We're exceptional."
- Green Goblin. :)

Really really good job! This is a very real poem and it's refreshing. 

on Sep. 25 2010 at 6:22 pm
soccer_star4GOD SILVER, Bradford, Kentucky
5 articles 1 photo 28 comments
i honestly didn't even notice :)

Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 6:14 pm
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

awww, thanks!!! :)

 

and ooops! just noticed the typo! darn it! its supposed to be that not the. :(


on Sep. 25 2010 at 12:15 pm
soccer_star4GOD SILVER, Bradford, Kentucky
5 articles 1 photo 28 comments
girl! im lovin' this! i can totally relate to this poem! :DDD keep up the good work!


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