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I Want Real Love

July 26, 2010
By wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.


I promised myself,
I wouldn't fall for your lies.
But my lips quiver,
And all I can do is cry.

I have no one else,
But myself to blame.
You left me with nothing,
But sadness and shame.

How could I fall,
For someone like you?
I should have known,
It was too good to be true.

So many moments,
I begin to wonder,
How you did it.
My heart is what was plundered.

I've felt this way before,
And it hurts all the same.
It just gets you one step closer to the person,
Who finally makes you lose all the pain.

I want someone,
Who is true and loyal.
I want someone,
Who makes me forget about the pain and turmoil.

I want someone who loves me,
And doesn't just walk away.
I want him to see me for who I am,
I want to make him stay.

I don't want love,
To be one sided.
No longer torn,
Or even divided.


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wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:29 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

awh, thank you, thank you! :) 

wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:29 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Thank you so much :) 

wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:28 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

awh, thank you :) 

on Jul. 30 2010 at 12:56 am
katiepickelsimer GOLD, Dededo, Other
13 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Throw your dreams into space like a kite, and you do not know what it will bring back, a new life, a new friend, a new love.

-Anais Nin

I love this so I tagged it as one of my favorites:)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:58 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Wow this is so good. And what your saying makes complete sense... I love it!!! The emotion and feeling put into this is amazing. you did a great job. keep it up. maybe you could check out some of my word, i would love to hear your opinion on it. once again GOOD JOB!! :)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:31 pm
SamIsSmiling GOLD, Rimbey, Alabama
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education." Albert Einstein

Wow, I usually don't much care for stuff about relationships and all that, but this is really good(:

wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:44 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

thank you! :) 

on Jul. 29 2010 at 3:38 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

I really liked this :) good job :) check out my work? :D

on Jul. 29 2010 at 2:21 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Very rhythmic. Well done!

wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:24 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

thank you ! :)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 7:46 am
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.
-jesus

THANK YOU! haha. iI know exactly what you Mean.

good job. pleasE looK at my work and coMmenT iI need feedback! keeP writing!!! :)