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June 9, 2010
By kms777 GOLD, Winn, Michigan
kms777 GOLD, Winn, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"learn from your mistakes but regret not a thing"

i sit here in my seat
just thinking of you.
i wish i could know if you
liked me too.
i find myself
lost in a daze
dreaming about you and me.
holding hands. hugging. kissing
i look at you
trying to figure out what youre thinking. you look over.
and smile your gorgous smile.
thats when i knew.
you were more than a crush.

The author's comments:
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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 6:40 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

It's not a bad poem by any means, but I think that perhaps you could have done a bit more with it. Maybe throw in some words that are uncommon just to mix it up a bit? I did like it, though, and I can relate to it as well, so bravo. Could you please read my poem Sowing Poppies sometime? I would love to hear your opinion