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I don't care

April 18, 2010
By ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
21 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

How far away are you?
You seem to be drifting.
Don't tell me I'm crazy,
because I won't listen.
I'm not stubborn,
I'm smart,
I'm not clingy,
I care,
You're not true,
You betray,
I thought I loved you,
I just don't care.

The author's comments:
For anyone who was betrayed by those people who had done them wrong.

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on Oct. 23 2014 at 3:01 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I love this! :) In way, I can rather connect. This is such a powerful poem; though it may be short, it's still powerful and has a lot of meaning. :) It has so much, emotion and rawness, and just honesty. I just love that it has feeling. Thank you, my friend! For sharing this. :)

on May. 10 2010 at 6:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I really like this peice. "i just dont care" thats nice. its always nice to know someone doesnt care-especially when they can say it in such a poetically wonderful way.  5 stars.

on May. 9 2010 at 8:33 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

i really liked this. Tons of meaning in such a short poem. Check out some of mine!!!

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 3:15 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I like it! it touched me~ I like how it rhymes <3 love how its short and it has meanings!

Check out my work, people that can write like you must have great comments!

on May. 5 2010 at 7:11 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can do anything

wow this poem can relate to alot of people especially me keep up the good work