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January 12, 2010
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

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Abnormally stunning;
Perfect features, graceful movements;
Pale skin, piercing eyes framed in exquisite thick black lashes
Delicate structure and form, contradicting the attitude

Everyone wanting to be with her, no one seeing the true self that hides childishly behind the mask
If you look closely, you will see;
beauty is the beast

© Elaina V., Canton, OH

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sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 4:07 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

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thank u! yes, exactly:D
Sylvie BRONZE said...
on May. 4 2010 at 6:12 pm
Sylvie BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
3 articles 19 photos 18 comments

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"All kids are gifted; some just open their packages earlier than others" - Michael Carr

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This is excellent. It really shows how some people may seem all pretty and perfect, but inside, they may be nasty. "Some people's sum are less than their parts" 
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 6:51 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

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You're Welcome and Thank You!
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 5:53 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

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awe thannkk u!! it means alot, i <3 ur work:))
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:10 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

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Very beautiful. I love the image created in this. Keep writing.
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 9:29 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

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awesome. ill be sure 2 read some ;))

just lemme know when the newest

come out 2! <3
Mikaela GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 7:33 pm
Mikaela GOLD, Bellingham, Washington
11 articles 29 photos 150 comments

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"Here I stand, I can do no other."

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Well I would love to have you read some of mine! :D

Right now I'm waiting for two of my newest poems to be accepted...
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 7:17 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

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thxxx! i would luv 2 read some of urz
Mikaela GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 12:08 am
Mikaela GOLD, Bellingham, Washington
11 articles 29 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here I stand, I can do no other."

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Oh, I love it! "Beauty IS the beast."

Amazing.

Can't wait to read more of your work!