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Truth.

January 6, 2010
By Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments

blindness, madness. suffer in silence
fragile, crippled. indication of violence
scorch, torch, blaze, ignite
flesh becomes ash, flames glow white
tainted lips glimmer false dread
caressing your scars, delicate and red
your starless eyes twinkle empty and corrupt
destruction seethes beneath your skin craving to erupt
vile sins then begin spilling off your lashes
ivory skin once luminous is stained with ruby slashes
charred emotions poison you to the very core
your broken soul becomes more tangled than it was before
Punishment is pleasure. Insanity is bliss.
the stale decaying cigarette still sears your tarnished lips



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AnneW SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 11:39 pm
AnneW SILVER, Santa Clara, California
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wow, this is amazing! It drew me in from the very beginning. I was just browsing through some poems, mostly only reading portions of them, but I had to read this entire one. It is truly beautiful in a sad way. Great job! Keep it up.

One critique: you might want to play with capitalization a bit, I think it could add to your writing.

on Jan. 20 2010 at 11:18 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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