CARNELIAN | Teen Ink

CARNELIAN

November 9, 2022
By Maya1211 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
Maya1211 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
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Blue eyes

green eyes

brown eyes

amber eyes.


Eyes that glisten,

like polished carnelian.


Eyes that glow bright,

like the autumn sun.


The eyes you wear

on your face

your ears

and your neck.


Eyes that cry louder than the crashing stream 

cascading off the rocks at Palestaid Falls.


Your eyes of gold.


The author's comments:

This piece is about how my significant other made me feel loved and confident in myself and my eyes when brown eyes are always frowned upon for being so common. Lines 10-12 reference my earrings and necklace of carnelian that they gifted me due to the similarity of the color to my eyes. 


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