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Excluded

July 9, 2022
By ellahawks25 BRONZE, Washington, Utah
ellahawks25 BRONZE, Washington, Utah
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Sometimes I lie awake wondering

What I am doing wrong

Perhaps it has to do with my muttering

Or my need to belong


I’d like to say I don’t understand

Why you make me feel this way

But the truth is at hand

I can see why every day


You don’t know how it hurts

I can’t always be strong

Nothing works

And I am only crumbling along


Cut me loose

To escape loneliness’s noose

I need a different light

So I’ll be on my own tonight


The author's comments:

This free verse poem is inspired by the intense feelings of loneliness and hurt from being excluded. It takes place in the mind of someone deeply hurt by a close friend. My hope for this poem is to encourage others to seek to let go of hurtful relationships and find the joy that comes from loving one's own self. 


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Afra ELITE said...
on Jul. 16 2022 at 12:47 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

So relatable!!!
By the way, this was fantabulous...I really enjoyed reading it...👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻