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May 4, 2021
By wondermahima BRONZE, Chennai, Other
wondermahima BRONZE, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Dare to Dream Big.

I felt my surroundings change

The clouds were shadowy ashen and pale ,

I felt sad


A strong breeze blew around me dishevelling my hair,

I felt infuriated

The birds chirped in the evergreen trees in the garden surrounded by vivid grass,

I felt Happy

I felt like an empress sitting in a glass throne ,

with its glass gleaming in the golden light from the crystals of the chandelier

I felt like a warrior holding the hilt of a sword glimmering with its ruby crystal

I felt like a brave girl acting in spite of fear

Then my surroundings changed from its fantasy nature to something familiar,

I am holding a book , with its fragrance leading to bliss,

Looking up at the bright , magnificent , enchanting and sunburst sky ,

And, clouds that appeared like pearly white cotton candies,

And the exquisite rainbow .

The leaves of the trees in the garden, shimmered with pearls of water ,

The flower opened its petals gracefully ,dancing to the sweet chirping of birds,


To watch the magnificent sky.

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Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 24 2021 at 3:23 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 957 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.


on May. 5 2021 at 11:10 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Good poem! If you could give me some advice on my poems I would really appreciate it.