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Old age

December 14, 2020
By Anonymous

When you're old, all you want

to do is look

at the scenery.

 

something tugs you out of

the house past

the crumbling walls and

broken swing

 

a longing to see something alive and

young, and yet ageless as

the sky.

 

You feel their body weighed down by time, the

gears and spindles worn

with overuse and yet

still ticking

 

You think to yourself

"time has trapped me

in it's vise-like grip,

squeezing

       Squeezing

               Squeezing

the life from me.

But the sea is not

held tightly

with a white-knuckled grasp.

The ocean is as old as the world

yet as young as the next tide."

 

You rest your aching bones, at last, on the

expansive beach, glittering like stardust

fallen from heaven.

 

And you watch as the ocean washes clouds upon the shore, and

Pulls the sun

from the sky.


The author's comments:

I like poems but never really appreciated how much work they took. This is my first real poem, so please tell me what you think. Any constructive criticism is welcome


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