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I Miss You

November 23, 2020
By bellaruiz4317 BRONZE, Oswego, Illinois
bellaruiz4317 BRONZE, Oswego, Illinois
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I miss you


I miss you. 

I miss the way your fingers gently pressed into my back when we hugged.

I miss the stubble that scratched my face when you kissed my cheek. 

I miss the smell of your favorite cologne lingering on your shirt. 

I miss the cheesy texts telling me how much you loved me. 

I miss the voicemails in which you announced who you were, even though I already knew.

But you were the ticking time bomb with a warm smile. 

And when you exploded, you took all of us with you. 


The author's comments:

This piece is about my grandfather who passed away on August 31st of 2020. We were very close, and his death truly shook my world and made me feel things I didn't think I could feel. While this poem is very simple and minimalistic, sometimes I find it easier for me to say how I'm feeling rather than overcomplicate it with analogies or other literary devices. This poem is just about how much I miss him. I don't need to make it pretty, because there is nothing pretty about losing someone you love so deeply. 


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