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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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blackrose95 BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2010 at 5:20 pm
this is really well written what was your inspiration?
icingonthecake BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2010 at 8:58 pm
Great :D I love it.
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:44 pm
I love this peom! Great job... it is very well written.
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:55 pm
It's the truth, thanks for writting this....it sums up how I've felt the past few years. Great rhyming btw:)
Everhart said...
on May. 3 2010 at 5:05 pm
Seriously. If you have to say something degrading, keep your mouth shut.
Anonymous01 PLATINUM said...
on May. 3 2010 at 4:31 pm
i love it ;D
love-hurts__i-know SILVER said...
on May. 3 2010 at 3:17 pm
OMG this is like the best!!!!! why is it that all the guys i've ever like have been jerks?!?!!?
young thug said...
on May. 3 2010 at 11:19 am
this poem is great it might be wierd but i liked it
chartothalatte GOLD said...
on May. 3 2010 at 10:01 am
weird... well written, but weird.
we'llkeepthisprivat said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:40 am
wow
wierd
im single
grettelfinkster1234 BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:39 am
If you say so.
grettelfinkster1234 BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:38 am
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Well. This is verrrryyyyyyy disturbing. But I think I ummmmm like it. Maybe.
PrincessBethyyy GOLD said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:19 am
I like. =]
piper said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:13 am
wow its kinda funny how this is so much like my life it was good keep writing
Mizzie.Kelli said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:42 am
This is a very good poem for someone who has just broken up wit a jerky guy. It can relate to almost all women who have dated in the past
invisible13 GOLD said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:06 am
it was amazing you took the feeling we all get one time or another, and put it into words. that's something i just could never do. check mine out. if you have time. please. and keep writing
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