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All These Crazy Voices

April 23, 2013
By ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:

All these crazy voices
Talking in my head,
Wishing I was dead.

All these crazy voices
Keeping me awake,
Bringing back the memories,
The pain and the heartbreak.

All these crazy voices
Holding in the hurt,
Making me remember
The bad,the hate,the dirt.

All these crazy voices
Telling me "give up",
But I will not surrender,
And I will stay on top.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Apr. 7 2014 at 12:44 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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this is one of my favorite poems on t.i. it sounds really good  

on Sep. 17 2013 at 5:48 pm
LexiDawn SILVER, Sanford, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations."

"It was books that me made feel that, perhaps, I was not completely alone."

I liked how you repeated "all these crazy voices" each time. It brought emphasis to the poem.

on May. 1 2013 at 10:02 am
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

Cool! U r a really good writer.....I like the first stanza :)