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Gothic Doll

September 17, 2009
By Bree.Jalique SILVER, Tracy, California
Bree.Jalique SILVER, Tracy, California
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Somber Expression
Dark empty eyes
How does it feel
To see all
But not be alive

Your broken heart
Is it still beating
Lost in this world
So dead inside

Empty doll
How does it feel
To be still breathing
When your heart feels
As though it isn't beating

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on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:34 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Wow this is really beautiful. I love the way it's written. I can really relate to it. Keep writing

on Sep. 25 2009 at 11:47 pm
kandeekaine SILVER, Cave Creek, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Hollywood is a place where they'll pay you a thousand dollars for a kiss and fifty cents for your soul

i like this