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Make Believe MAG

By Anonymous

We were doomed from the beginning,
Blinded from the start,
But nothing can be done
To fool a happy heart.
With each smile and giggle,
Every embrace and every kiss,
We were shooting toward a happy ending,
And we missed.
Cinderella lost her slipper
And it was never found.
Prince Charming came too late,
Now no one’s sleeping sound.
Pillows are soaking wet,
Hopes are all lost.
No more dancing in the clouds.
Dreams have all been tossed.
The fairy-tale warmth has left us
As winter’s setting in.
The storybook reads the end,
But where should we begin?
Now your heart strives to be broken,
And you long for lonely nights
This time our ship is sinking
We’re going down without a fight.

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on Jan. 20 2011 at 8:06 am
dancergurl22 BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Love, like you can't get hurt
Dance, like no one's watching
Live, like there's no tomorrow

this is great! :D

on Jan. 15 2011 at 8:20 pm
WerewolfWriting BRONZE, Eerie, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is not about the breaths we take but about the people who take our breath away."

My favorite part is: "Cinderella lost her slipper/And it was never found/Prince Charming came too late/Now no one's sleeping sound." It said more then the words that were put. Good work!

on Jan. 1 2011 at 6:56 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

his almsot every day, its good to see its finally getting the recognition it deserves :)

on Dec. 29 2010 at 7:35 pm
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Piglet: How do you spell love?
Pooh: You don't spell it, you feel it


on Dec. 3 2010 at 7:42 pm
brysmarie12 PLATINUM, Neoga, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the author of my own life... unfortunately I'm writing in pen and can't erase my mistakes.

I can honestly say this is one of my favorite pieces I've ever read. It's very well put together and extremely relatable. I hope you didn't write this from personal experiences, because I've been through it. But if so, keep your head up!

on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:57 pm
Lost.In.Life BRONZE, Port Angeles, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments

This shows a lot of hard work and We all know we've been through the same and if not well, i guess now you do.x]

Love this definately one of my faves

on Dec. 3 2010 at 10:54 am
iReally Like This Poem It Makes Yuh think Alil Harder On The Realness Of Todays Current Events.. Ienjoyed This Alot!!<3

on Dec. 1 2010 at 10:27 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

beautiful- stunning!!!

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on Nov. 16 2010 at 2:32 pm
HahlehAnn, Cameron, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I can accept failure, everyone fails at something. But i can't accept not trying." -Micheal Jordan
"Life is what happens when your to busy making other plans." -John Lennon

you wrote this very well, staying on the topic is the hardest thing and you did it. its really good.:)

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:42 pm
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 64 comments
Really good, loved it!

on Nov. 11 2010 at 3:24 pm
Monkee63 SILVER, Independence, Kentucky
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I want to feel my life while I'm in it"- Meryl Streep
"Live, Life Love"
"Everybody wants happiness, nobody wants pain, but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain."

Wow! That was really great. It gave a great mental picture. Great Imagination! I loved it! :)

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:58 am
bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
84 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies. -House

I really loved this poem ,created a fantastic image in my mind.

on Nov. 7 2010 at 11:36 pm
spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
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deserving to be put to song, this is incredible

on Oct. 24 2010 at 5:14 pm
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love
Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance!
If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

This is so beautifully written. I loved this so much... Keep writing

Kandin said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 2:25 pm
This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read, I love it.

on Oct. 21 2010 at 8:37 pm
deafening_silence SILVER, Miami, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent" -Elenor Roosevelt

Wow. That's truly beautiful, very sad though, but so well written. I can really relate, I love this.

on Oct. 20 2010 at 11:20 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
225 articles 4 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day, your life will flash before your eyes; make sure it's worth watching."

love it. u r so talented!

Keep writing!

on Oct. 20 2010 at 8:37 pm
Hellolovebritt SILVER, Olive Branch, Mississippi
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment
This is pretty good, I'll admit. :)

on Oct. 20 2010 at 7:53 pm
SoftballPoet PLATINUM, Branson, Missouri
26 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is like a rubber band. When one person lets go, it hurts the other person who is still holding on."

this is very good. it really creates a scene, and a emotion with it. i can definately relate. good work

on Oct. 20 2010 at 1:08 pm
Jule92xc BRONZE, Smithsburg, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not who I am underneath, but what I do that defines me..." -Batman

finally, i read poems on here all the time, and i really actually like this one. it's sort of depressing, but that's what i usually write about. keep writing! and check out some of my poems please!