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November 14th

February 10, 2010
By Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene


One whole year has gone and passed,
making our memories stretch and last,
it's been fun, it's been true,
sometimes far away, but mostly next to you.

We've been to movies, we've been to malls,
staying up late and still making calls,
swapping jackets, playing cards,
sometimes beating you was a little bit hard.

Lying in the grass, watching the stars,
trying to count them, listening to cars,
asking bout soulmates made my heart flutter, i don't want to be with just any other.

before you found me i was heading downhill,
watching the tears fall onto the sill,
counting the minutes, seeming like hours,
just to pass time, drawing wird flowers.

You entered my world and suddenly it's changed,
releasing the heart doomed to be caged,
out went the rain and in came the sun,
all my sad days were finally done.

God the year just flew right by,
not even stopping to say goodbye,
me and you? we'll last forever,
and it all started the fourteenth of november.


The author's comments:
To my ex. i have gotten over him, but he has forever taken a spot in my heart.

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on Apr. 1 2010 at 8:02 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

This is so sweet. I especially love how you wrote it from the heart! Keep on writing! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my work, as well? Much appreciated.

on Feb. 27 2010 at 9:50 am
catherinee. BRONZE, Houston, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments
i love it.

my birthday is on the same day! haha.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 2:50 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

thx!! srry to hear bout yur ex. im glad you cud relate. thats wat i aim for. i try to put a peice of meh in ever poem i write so that it all comes from my heart.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:34 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is really pretty!! you wrote it from the heart, andthats all that matters!!!!!

on Feb. 24 2010 at 8:41 pm
Wow, This was really good. When my boyfriend and i broke up, i was so lost. We were like this, but i mean, what can you do but more on? Its not your fault. Ha. but anyway good job girl. (:

on Feb. 24 2010 at 2:24 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

awww thanks star. i love getting feed back. :)

on Feb. 23 2010 at 8:44 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
28 articles 3 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

this is SO good! I absolutely love it, and I can relate to every single word! I can tell you wrote it from the heart, and that is what writing is ALL about! :)

on Feb. 23 2010 at 3:56 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

thank you alot! he really meant the world to me.

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on Feb. 23 2010 at 3:53 pm
lalaj94 GOLD, Oldenburg, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the center of all arrogance, especially regarding art, is a naivity beyond words or brushstrokes. -I said it

i love this! its so real and believable!


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