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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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passion.fable14 said...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 5:18 pm
geeze. what's wrong with you? OBVIOUSLY you can't appreciate beautiful work when it's sitting right on front of you on a silver plate.
 
forgottenpenname This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 9:15 pm
Oh my gosh, this is amazing!
 
silent-is-loud said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 3:53 pm

Wonderful Work!!

Can you guys look at comment at my recent story, " The Fire" it is a true story and i want to show it to the girl's mother to make her proud.

 
syed954 said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 9:40 am

This poem was great. 

One of my poems was just accepted and is now online. Can you guys please comment and rate it?

 
hazle1eyes replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 10:39 am

are you new at this

 

 
LaChrisha said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 9:07 pm
i wish it was too because i would take my car and put it in reverse so i can do alot of things over
 
Lucy(: This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 1:35 pm

this is so deep with lots of meaning

it seems so heavy, like time is something you connot controll (obviously) so pttuing it on something simple would be so easy.

well written (=

 
carvedinwood said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 8:33 am
Simply beautiful.
 
Danny5 said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 5:08 pm
wow, really great. it's so simple and short, but really so meaningful
 
WritingLoverForever said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:05 pm
This is amazing.
 
darkangel09 said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 5:46 pm
wow, beautiful! i agree that would be great
 
just.me_899 said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 7:38 am
Awesome :) this is worded really good
 
mermaid said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 8:25 pm
yeah ur right..time will come
 
strangefirecrackers said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 5:34 pm
beautiful. i was hooked on by the 1st line. :) 
 
peacelovepoetry said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 12:18 pm
it's short and sweet...well done!
 
tweety1ofakind said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 7:51 pm
i like it !!
 
Shelly-T said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 9:13 pm
This is nice.  The first line is a winner.  Keep it up!
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2010 at 5:42 pm
this is very good! the shortness of the poem makes every word a prize. the reader wants to grasp every word so they dont miss anything. very well done! check out some of my work, too if you want!
 
Shabria said...
May 19, 2010 at 3:39 pm
It is very interesting but very short. On the other hand I liked your style of words. Excellent job!
 
irrara12 said...
May 19, 2010 at 2:52 pm
it's sad but it's what we all wish
 
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