Alone | Teen Ink


June 3, 2009
By bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
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She stands there
in the center
She walks
by herself
She talks
to the four walls
She cries
all alone

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zoella said...
on May. 19 at 7:39 am
zoella, Mumbai, Other
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So relatable. Love this poem a lot

on Apr. 10 at 3:20 am
Anaïs--- BRONZE, Neverland, Other
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Words that touch your soul. Well done :)

on Mar. 6 at 7:47 pm
isabellapopa BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The best way to fight problems and to fight against war is through dialogue." - Malala

so short and so powerful. i love this poem!

K1dby said...
on Feb. 25 at 5:24 pm
K1dby, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"War doesn't prove who is right. Only who is left."

Short and sweet! Love this, emotionally attaching with few words! :D

on Feb. 7 at 7:54 pm
lydiagerges BRONZE, Franklin, Wisconsin
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very few words with what so much interpretation can be mad. beautiful. xoxo

on Jan. 10 at 10:29 am
lightningboss201, Houston, Texas
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on Jan. 2 at 8:04 pm
Chayaisdbest BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Hard times don't create heroes. It is during those hard times when the 'hero' within us is revealed."
-Bob Riley

Wow! So crazy that such few words mean so much and so much of what you described is so real. No fakeness, if you get what I mean?

on Dec. 9 2018 at 10:48 pm
McKennaMiddWrites BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Be good to people. And don't forget that you are people, too"
- Colin Wright

It really pulls the reader in!

on Nov. 19 2018 at 2:36 pm
Shayla.Long DIAMOND, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Teenagers only have to focus on themselves - its not until we get older that we realize that other people exist."- Jennifer Lawrence

this is such a short poem but so amazing. I love this.

WhiteWolf815 said...
on Jul. 26 2018 at 12:26 pm
WhiteWolf815, None, Alabama
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It's almost disturbing how short yet amazingly beautiful and alluring this piece is.

mhkhan BRONZE said...
on Jul. 26 2018 at 4:51 am
mhkhan BRONZE, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“I have nothing to offer anybody, except my own confusion.”
― Jack Kerouac

Loved it

TessJW BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2018 at 9:08 am
TessJW BRONZE, Lincoln, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‘ Death is not the greatest loss in life, the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live,’ - Norman Cousins.

‘ Standing alone doesn’t mean I am alone, it means I am strong enough to handle things all by myself,’ - Unkown.

This is dazzling. So short but so beautiful. I love it.

on Apr. 21 2011 at 10:03 pm
KrissyJazz DIAMOND, Mankato, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Wisdom begins in wonder.

beautiful. it's so difficult to say things i their simplest forms. well done.

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