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Picture Street MAG

February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.



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on Nov. 24 2009 at 2:20 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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I like this poem only because of it's length and it's simplicity. It's so unique and abstract. If you would like, come check out some of my work. I think you will really enjoy it.

Holmes SILVER said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 1:20 pm
Holmes SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's only when we've lost everything that we're free to do anything."- Fight Club

No-ice! (nice) ;)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 2:00 am
hi,randomperson. GOLD, Fall City, Washington
13 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not forbidden but it is a risky to fall into,but if its real-than you should stay true. Love is a funny thing,it cant be bought like a diamond ring. Love is greif and pain, you feel lost and insane.Love is a wonderful treasure,keep it forever

It tis' wonderful

bamboom212 said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 3:01 pm
I get it and it's kOoL. It's short and to the point, but really good. ^_^

ps13795 SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 7:05 am
ps13795 SILVER, Baguio, Other
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Amazing. It's short and simple and yet it says so much!!! ^_^

likelionsdo said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 6:27 pm
This is wonderful. I especially like that you said black car; it adds so much more to this poem. I can't stop thinking about it.

KonyaB!!! GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 3:46 pm
KonyaB!!! GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
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Wow this is nice. Wouldn't it be awesome if we can go back and ahead of time? :)

It was really good...can you read my poems? Only two... I'm not that great, and I am trying to improve, so it would be great if you could take a look!! :)

emmy.g BRONZE said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 11:16 am
emmy.g BRONZE, Brighton, Other
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i really liked this, it's really great!

Lonleydandy said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:23 am
This is one of the few poems I can actually relate to. If time were a street, I would keep going down, and up to see how my life would work out. This was great.

Jamie S said...
on Jun. 23 2009 at 8:20 pm
The poem “Picture Street” by Beau W. caught my eye. I like that it’s short because I often forget the beginning of a poem or story by the time I get to the end.



I like the idea of time as a street that you can drive up and down. This poem intrigued me – the idea of being able to travel in time. I would fix my mistakes, relive my happy memories, get to know those I had brushed off or forgotten, and many other things.



I really admire that although this poem is short, it is still a great poem. Whenever we have poetry assignments, I write and write because it never seems quite complete. It ­always seems childish and unfinished.

on Jun. 8 2009 at 5:30 pm
richardswifey SILVER, Lyndonville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"it s better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all"

it has lots of meaning in it i loved this one

on May. 18 2009 at 6:32 pm
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

Its mellow and meaningful, I loved it.

on May. 18 2009 at 4:53 am
Stefan.W BRONZE, Droblas, South Carolina
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If only it was that easy... (Google Maps says that there's a 'Time Street' in Irving, TX; Iberia, LA; Providence, RI; and Shelby, TN.) Very insightful nonetheless.

on May. 9 2009 at 10:19 pm
Courtney.Firestone BRONZE, Thornhill, Ontario, Other
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If time were a street, I'm pretty sure it would be a highway that we cruise down at 120 km/h. Where does the time go? Hmmm...



Anyways, very nice writing! As the cliche goes, short and sweet! :)

on May. 6 2009 at 8:09 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
51 articles 6 photos 105 comments
simple yet powerful...great job. i have trouble expressing so much in so little words.

on Apr. 28 2009 at 1:33 am
GoldenGirl PLATINUM, Vashon, Washington
41 articles 31 photos 116 comments
very interesting. Short poems make you think about the words more. good symbolism.

on Apr. 27 2009 at 11:25 pm
shingarevdaniel SILVER, Beverly Hills, California
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small poem but strong

bs

on Apr. 27 2009 at 8:24 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
56 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

its so short... its good, i like poems that rhyme.. lol

on Apr. 19 2009 at 1:58 am
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

that was amazing. i love how insightful you are. short and sweet.

on Apr. 18 2009 at 5:34 am
Pamela Pozos BRONZE, Cicero, Illinois
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Sometimes short writings like these are the ones that mean the most