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February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.



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on Apr. 22 2012 at 11:50 am
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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Check out my poem "puddle-wonderful"

vazenitran98 said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 4:21 pm
vazenitran98, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet."

This was a simple poem. Nonetheless,it was amazing. ;D

on Mar. 31 2012 at 2:39 pm
BeautyFromPain21 SILVER, McGraw, New York
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
the only thing to fear is fear itself.

Simple is elegance. Freaking awesome!

on Mar. 9 2012 at 10:20 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

this is beautiful! AWESOMEEEE!!!! 'I'd drive a black car up and down time'

SO true..


on Mar. 9 2012 at 6:19 pm
LateralusDrive, Spencerville, Maryland
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I love how it's so simple but full of a feeling that almost everyone can relate to.

Kipitama said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 8:37 am
Kipitama, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

simple,yet really cool:) great job!

on Feb. 14 2012 at 4:20 pm
Let-Love-In PLATINUM, Chester, Connecticut
27 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You fail only if you stop writing."

every single person in the world can relate to this. amazing.

on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:18 am
Andres60 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments
It relates to readers well and how you tied time to a street and yourself to a car was good too!

on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:53 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

This poem relates well to the reader---how we all feel this way!

on Jan. 25 2012 at 2:07 pm
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

simplistic beauty

on Jan. 3 2012 at 7:19 pm
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
We must become the change we want to see
-Mahatma Gandhi

Well done. Message is very pronounced and very easy to relate to!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 3:07 pm
alexb42621 PLATINUM, Brecksville, Ohio
26 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To err is human."

This is a great metaphor. It lets us feel like we're in control of where we are on the line of time. We can go back, we can speed up, hit the brakes to enjoy a moment, go ahead to see what's coming. I absolutely love it!

Steamer GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:43 am
Steamer GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is so fragile, yet so dangerous." ---I said this in a dream I had

I like this poem, very short, but you got the message across. Reminds me of Hemingway. Check out my stuff, it tends to be short also.

on Jan. 3 2012 at 5:28 am
rolzpolz98 BRONZE, Pune, Other
2 articles 2 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
my favourite movie is my life! ( i dont think that is even a quote but still i just like saying it)

thats cooll...... ppl plz check out and comment on my work

lil.awol ELITE said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:24 am
lil.awol ELITE, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"there's a darkness upon me that's flooded in light, and i'm frightened by those that don't see it" ~the avett brothers, head full of doubt

i like this, it makes me think. but i don't get why this can get published in the mag but my stuff can't. any suggestions? check out my work :)

on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:40 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Hey, this is cool. Check out my stuff?

on Dec. 8 2011 at 3:23 pm
I wish time was a blind man over whom I could run my car. I'd run over him, back over him, then do it again--all for the sake of spite.

on Nov. 20 2011 at 8:37 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments
plz, check out my work. nice poem

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2011 at 10:59 am
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Very constructive, well done.

 


on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:25 pm
mattisonteeter GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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That's great. i loved it


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