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February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.



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on May. 19 2010 at 5:42 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this is very good! the shortness of the poem makes every word a prize. the reader wants to grasp every word so they dont miss anything. very well done! check out some of my work, too if you want!

Shabria SILVER said...
on May. 19 2010 at 3:39 pm
Shabria SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself" Quote by Miguel Jontel
"Don't be a talker, be a doer" Quote by Ms. Tanequa
"Enjoy Life" Quote by Akil
"Do what you love"

It is very interesting but very short. On the other hand I liked your style of words. Excellent job!

on May. 19 2010 at 2:52 pm
irrara12 BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
3 articles 2 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
not all who wander are lost-jrr tolkien

it's sad but it's what we all wish

on May. 19 2010 at 2:23 pm
ALY123456ADS BRONZE, WALLIS, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOVE IS CRAZY!!!!

i like it !!!!!

tara p BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2010 at 1:47 am
tara p BRONZE, Plainsboro, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
very good job, keep up the good work

on May. 11 2010 at 11:58 pm
Kiki_Lafleur BRONZE, Ridgefield, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
don't have one right now!!

Mine took about 1.5 months!

MYWORLDADS said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 9:36 pm
VERY GOOD!! IT'S SHORT, BUT IT REALLY MAKES YOU THINK DEEPER ABOUT WHAT IT REALLY MEANS. YOU DEFINE IT IN A REALLY GOOD WAY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

on Apr. 27 2010 at 4:04 pm
sarahbethkoch BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments
your mind is beautiful, thank your for your existance.

on Apr. 27 2010 at 2:58 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
20 articles 8 photos 173 comments
You just about summed it up. I love it!

on Apr. 27 2010 at 12:08 pm
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
20 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

It's simple but complex, short but not shortlived; it stays in your mind for quite a while. I like it...

on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:23 am
live.create16 GOLD, Dedham, Maine
11 articles 4 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Far away there in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them, but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.
- Louisa May Alcott.

this is amazing! i love how simple it is, but it really makes you think about its meaning! :)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:51 pm
Tiffanie_ SILVER, Sedro-woolley, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not tell me the sky is the limit. Because there are footprints on the moon

I like this poem, not only is it pretty but intellectually captivating

on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:01 pm
annalisewarnock, Saugus, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments
This is really good and it really captures your thoughts.

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 6:19 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

this is just unspeakably good.

there must be some sort of law against writing poems that are this beautiful.

completely amazing.


on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:29 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

This was really good, I loved it!!!!

 


on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:49 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments

even though this is so short and simple it catches the person's mind and makes em think.

Love it.


on Apr. 5 2010 at 2:30 pm
KayKays222 BRONZE, Ordway, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
You're the forever lasting rose in my garden of life

I really do agree. That is so original too! That's awesom! You should take a look at my poems....tell me what you think

Rabaya GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 12:44 pm
Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
17 articles 0 photos 18 comments
Wow! This is really good. Check out my stuff if you get the chance.=]

I_am_ivy said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:05 pm
Thanks! Yeah, it took a while, but I finally got posted. *cheer*

on Mar. 14 2010 at 1:18 pm
writergirl13 GOLD, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
11 articles 8 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
All are lunatics, but he who can analyze his delusions is called a philosopher.
Ambrose Bierce

First post?:) it usually takes about a week or two, but it's not that defined. my friend's poem got posted in a few days, but my piece took a little longer. it might also depend on length. :)


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