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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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CraziiBunny said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 10:50 am:
omg don't amke me cry this is all so tryue
 
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Showchoir2012 said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 9:29 am:
oh my goodness its so true....
 
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Morgaine3 said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 8:50 am:
Thats so true.... I love it.
 
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shywriter said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 7:51 am:
this was an amazing poem! Love it <3
 
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natalie said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 12:37 am:
incredible :)
 
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ajparker said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 4:18 pm:
I am going to change brown to blond and send it to my friend!
 
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ilovetinkerbell said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 4:48 pm:
I love it. great job..
 
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Kwkittycat said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 1:36 pm:
love it <3
 
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Hyperness said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 11:27 am:
AMAZING poem!!! i LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!!!
 
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writerxchicx said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 9:09 am:
I loved this when I read it in the mag and planned on looking it up but I guess I didn't have to. :)
AMAZING job on this. I can totally relate and the poem is just amazing. Not a thing I'd change about it. :)
 
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shorty gurl 1234 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 11:07 pm:
i absolutly love this poem now i would dedicate it to my loved ones
 
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chula123 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 11:03 pm:
well i rilly think this poem is rilly nice to all those people who think there couples are jerks
 
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Kelz1141This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 2:26 pm:
I loved it!
 
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Ms.me_2 said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 5:23 pm:
Wow this is so beautiful I love it....
 
FrySnickerdoodle replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 11:02 pm :
This is incredible, best poem I have read in a LONG while
 
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riedel said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 12:44 pm:
OMG !!! I have read this like 60 times and I absolutly LOVE IT !!Iy describes my "Friend " Mark perfectly ....Its so awesome ....I think Im going to read it again =) Keep up the good work !
 
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MeghanSanderson said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 8:45 am:
zomg lyk dis iz da bess po-um eye'v evar red!
 
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epcelia said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 6:24 pm:
((((((((((((((((:
 
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vino1992 said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 1:51 pm:
this is really great
 
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Ms.Sexxy2193 said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 11:23 am:
i totally adore this poem i definetly can relate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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