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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Kwkittycat said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 1:36 pm:
love it <3
 
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Hyperness said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 11:27 am:
AMAZING poem!!! i LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!!!
 
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writerxchicx said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 9:09 am:
I loved this when I read it in the mag and planned on looking it up but I guess I didn't have to. :)
AMAZING job on this. I can totally relate and the poem is just amazing. Not a thing I'd change about it. :)
 
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shorty gurl 1234 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 11:07 pm:
i absolutly love this poem now i would dedicate it to my loved ones
 
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chula123 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 11:03 pm:
well i rilly think this poem is rilly nice to all those people who think there couples are jerks
 
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Kelz1141 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 2:26 pm:
I loved it!
 
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Ms.me_2 said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 5:23 pm:
Wow this is so beautiful I love it....
 
FrySnickerdoodle replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 11:02 pm :
This is incredible, best poem I have read in a LONG while
 
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riedel said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 12:44 pm:
OMG !!! I have read this like 60 times and I absolutly LOVE IT !!Iy describes my "Friend " Mark perfectly ....Its so awesome ....I think Im going to read it again =) Keep up the good work !
 
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MeghanSanderson said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 8:45 am:
zomg lyk dis iz da bess po-um eye'v evar red!
 
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epcelia said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 6:24 pm:
((((((((((((((((:
 
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vino1992 said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 1:51 pm:
this is really great
 
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Ms.Sexxy2193 said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 11:23 am:
i totally adore this poem i definetly can relate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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snc947 said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 2:26 pm:
so true. great job writting the piece.
 
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Joyful_angel said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 11:25 am:
this poem really hit home. i kno sum1 like this, but he always comes bck 2 me... i would have never been abke 2 express it like u did~ your poem was AWESOME!!! cmnt on my poems if u want 2, cuz i culd use the feed back
 
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AndThisIsReal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 1:05 pm:
This is funny.
Relatable.
True. True. True.
And well written.
I really like it!
 
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starsonmysleeves This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 1:31 am:
i definitely know someone exactly like this. funny. i never would have been able to express him like this though. well done.
 
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Rebecca P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 12:58 am:
this reminds me of the poem from 10 things i hate about you in a good way! yours is more poetic and very beautifully written though. great job!
 
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Kaylynn_Loveless said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 3:03 pm:
Very well writen.
I like the breaking up of the stanzas for emphasis. Nice touch.
 
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CaseyLeigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 12:41 am:
I enjoyed this poem--it's very relatable. :]
 
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