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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Jun. 10 2016 at 2:24 am
slytherinborn BRONZE, Shepherdsville, Kentucky
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Omg same!!!

jedjake BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2016 at 10:19 am
jedjake BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
This is the way the world ends not with a bang but a whimper- T.S Eliot

haha I love it :@)

Ryan_N said...
on May. 3 2016 at 4:39 pm
omg. Much amaze, much wow!

Tkenns BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2016 at 8:40 pm
Tkenns BRONZE, Des Moines, Iowa
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It's got a nice feel. You wrote it very well!!! I know this gets annoying and is kinda cheesy, but I really need some people to read over my poems. I was just wondering if anyone had the time to check out and comment any criticism on my post TeenInk.com/users/Tkenns much appreciated!!!

dpurdy said...
on Mar. 23 2016 at 1:19 pm
dpurdy, Craryville Ny, New York
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Favorite Quote:
always love yourself no matter what.

omg i love this poem

JWALK said...
on Feb. 18 2016 at 1:41 pm
I love how easily I can relate to this poem.

Jwalk said...
on Feb. 18 2016 at 1:39 pm
I love how easily I can relate to your poem.

Jamerson said...
on Feb. 11 2016 at 12:10 pm
Jamerson, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't regret anything because at one point it was what you wanted." -Unknown

No, you're right. It is plagerism if she takes credit for it.

DogLover1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2016 at 8:59 pm
DogLover1 GOLD, Olympia, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
The Only Dancer You Should Compare Yourself To, Is The One You Used To Be

Amazing poem!

on Jan. 8 2016 at 1:41 pm
LongLifeStory, Mobile, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Live every day like its your last.

That was really awesome.

on Jan. 6 2016 at 2:06 pm
Love_Live_Write BRONZE, Kennett Square, Pennsylvania
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This is a really great piece that I honestly love! I really admire how you were able to portray so many emotions in one poem!

on Nov. 29 2015 at 9:35 pm
Caycethepoet SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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This is so simple, yet so beautiful and relatable. I love it!

on Nov. 10 2015 at 1:15 pm
itss.tere BRONZE, Muskegon, Michigan
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I love this so much ! I can relate to it cause i use to know someone like that. My heart literally hurts cause i'm remembering the amazing memories i had with that guy!

waish SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2015 at 1:27 am
waish SILVER, Ranchi, Other
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wow love this poem. and if you guys have a minute than see this stuff of mine and vote if you like TeenInk.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/836211/Im-Little-Bit-Alive/

on Nov. 5 2015 at 1:28 pm
eitbse@ew BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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“Jerk” Your poems are the ones I like to read. I am a freak for romance. You captured how he looked and traits, so your readers could have a image of what he looked like. You did a great job on this.

on Sep. 2 2015 at 9:23 pm
Literally made my heart hurt. There's a guy that is a total jerk, but I still have a crush on him..... but for me one of the aspects is the delicious cologne..

Merveille GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2015 at 12:51 pm
Merveille GOLD, Fulham, Other
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you have no reason to apologize.Everybody's experience is different.when this happened to me, i looked back and laughed.Why doesn't @CeceE14 say the same to the 24 people who it "MADE ME LAUGH"

on May. 26 2015 at 12:57 am
Caraid56 BRONZE, Moss Vale, Other
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So true! Truly beautiful

babyxrs SILVER said...
on May. 23 2015 at 4:48 pm
babyxrs SILVER, Holtville, California
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing hurts more than being dissapointed by the single person you thought would never hurt you.

Nice work :)

on Apr. 23 2015 at 11:27 am
_Tennessee_Love_ BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
¨the difference between promises and memories, is that we break promise and memories break us.¨

Beautifully written, I can relate to this very well, although the hair color would be changed to red haha, but still a wonderful piece keep up the work!


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