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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:28 pm
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

<3 it! plz check out some of mine? (:

on Feb. 19 2010 at 2:41 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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wow this is really good.! I have a lot of poems that are like this please check them out and tell me how u like them.! :)

on Feb. 19 2010 at 11:20 am
NonsensicalMuse PLATINUM, San Anotnio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing wrong with having your head in the clouds as long as you don't get altitude sickness"

"Perhaps you are right,perhaps not. I don't know 110% either way.All I know is that Im in search of truth. If you are too, let us be friends."

Love it. somehow jerks are so endearing.

on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:32 am
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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this is not your poem...so please be quiet.

on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:51 am
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

I know I've commented on this piece before, but it's so great...I could 't help myself. So where did your inspiration come from,f for this poem. And when you get the chance, check out my opinion essay on animal rights/vegetarianism

Perri said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 7:53 pm
this is my poem where did you get it from

Miriwms said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 7:30 pm
Miriwms, Snellville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates; you never know what your gonna get.~Tom Hanks, Forrest Gump

........ This is such an amazing poem... I totally feel your pain, only I don't think the one I love knows...

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on Feb. 18 2010 at 6:49 pm
S1234 BRONZE, Pelham, New York
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This is great!! To the point, but witty and well written.

Comment on my work if you get the chance!

on Feb. 17 2010 at 2:43 pm
joshua mitchell BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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I love this poem its the best one i have ever seen this is great.

on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:42 am
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

i really like this poem...its really good. you should check out my work

on Feb. 17 2010 at 9:10 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 5:27 pm
HunterGirl_58 GOLD, Los Lunas, New Mexico
11 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If this is what it takes to get there. . . . then BRING ON THE PAIN!!!"

Totally AWESOME!!! Theres no dought i cant relate to this!!! =D

jfini BRONZE said...
on Feb. 13 2010 at 10:26 pm
jfini BRONZE, Dennison, Ohio
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That was great!

:)

on Feb. 12 2010 at 1:39 pm
Natalie4ya GOLD, Laredo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"To each his own" "Love is being stupid together"

haha i really liked this. Very witty!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:26 pm
hiddenemotions BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!

wow you are very good! i love how it was simple yet had so much meaning!! plz write more!!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 3:33 pm
ClockworkLightbulb SILVER, Nottingham, Other
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I feel exactly this way too. ;] This is really good.

Skeezics GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 10:59 pm
Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
A childs voice, however honest and true, is meaningless to those who have forgotten how to listen.
Everyone faces obsticals. What defines you is how you overcome them. -J.R. Celski

I loved this poem.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 9:15 pm
PinkStar BRONZE, Oakland, New Jersey
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i love the flow of this, and i can completely relate to it! there's always that irresistable jerk in your life... ;-)

JennaBeth said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 9:04 pm
JennaBeth, Morrison, Oklahoma
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This is an amazing poem! Totally relate to it. I am posting work of my own for the first time and you should check it out!

luckyducky said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 6:52 pm
this is one of the best poems i have ever heard!!