Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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bubbles15 said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:20 am
wow...i like totally feel u on this!! wow this touched me and my memories O.O

MaxRideFan17 said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 4:58 pm
I feel the same way about someone but didn't know how to express it. Beautiful! Perfect imagery too. I loved it!

truelove GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 4:30 pm
truelove GOLD, Mansfield, Ohio
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i like it alot. keep wrighting.

on Jan. 13 2010 at 3:57 pm
It is so great

kheart SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 3:23 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart

i love this keep writing! Check out my Poems!

brookieboo said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 1:40 pm
i absolutely love this and can relate to it

on Jan. 13 2010 at 7:13 am
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face"
"no one ever drown in their own sweat"

wow this was great i loved it

LilBenj SILVER said...
on Jan. 12 2010 at 12:33 am
LilBenj SILVER, Richfield, Utah
6 articles 4 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a certain providence in the fall of a sparrow. - Hamlet

That's so Funny! It's so cool how you captured this relationship. Very Nice!

on Jan. 11 2010 at 5:11 pm
jacalexz BRONZE, Everett, Washington
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I can relate to this completely. beautifully constructed. :)

ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 10:10 pm
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
5 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Giving up doesn’t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. ”

Why is it we fall for jerks

on Jan. 7 2010 at 11:31 am
zelda712 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Through Power, I gain Victory through Victory, My Chains are broken.......

Wow you have alot of feelings about this poem, thanks for sharing!

on Jan. 7 2010 at 11:30 am
music_lover PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
MY quote: "Without music, life would be absolutely pointless.... Music is my life and it always will be!"

Nice description.... I like how you say, 'you precious jerk'. That is very descriptive and shows just how you feel. Nice job!

LaVonna SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 9:02 am
LaVonna SILVER, Owatonna, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"dont let education get in your way of learning" -my American Lit teacher

cute :) really liked theyour use of words

on Jan. 6 2010 at 7:36 am
Jessica17 BRONZE, Norfolk, Virginia
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Oh wow!

I love it!

on Jan. 5 2010 at 10:15 pm
MarinaNicole SILVER, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Turn and face the strange" - David Bowie
"Your Christians are so unlike your Christ" - Gandhi

This reminds me of a certain someone-- it's so friggin true dude. It's a great poem too, I'm glad it's in the magazine. You weren't one of those people who only rhyme for the sake of rhyming; it was cohesive. Anyways, really, really awesome.

MatthewZ said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 8:05 pm
nice! look at my poem too plz? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/156195/Airplanes/ rate and comment plz! thanks a million!

on Jan. 4 2010 at 2:51 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

oh my word this is amazing

on Jan. 3 2010 at 10:32 pm
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing, you'll fall for anything.

Haha whoaaaa, EXACTLY what i'm going through right now!!! :0 Creepy! But this is greeeat(:

*read my stuff people!

on Jan. 2 2010 at 10:48 am
I love this poem. It's like how I feel about someone I know. Or felt,that is.

on Jan. 1 2010 at 9:16 pm
Shirley_R_K SILVER, Liberty, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
But sanctify Christ as Lord in your hearts, always being ready to make a defense to everyone who asks you to give an account for the hope that is in you, yet with gentleness and reverence.
-1 Peter 3:15

It seems so. . . . devious, and almost satirical, I don't know it speaks to me and makes me feel emotions that I can't describe. . . I love the line, you precious jerk its like the sarcastic way you make fun of this jerk of yours is so. . .. piercing? I don't know, I like it, though!


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