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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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Sherky said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 9:06 pm
You are great Frances keep on the good writting dont ever give up like i did

on Jan. 25 2010 at 1:46 pm
♫Musicloving♫ BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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ha ha funny i don't know either

on Jan. 24 2010 at 9:35 pm
aStrelly SILVER, Moses Lake, Washington
6 articles 9 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dignity does not consist in possessing honours, but in deserving them." -Aristotle
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent."-Eleanor Roosevelt

Love this. (: very good!

on Jan. 24 2010 at 2:23 pm
EzriaRose SILVER, San Leandro, California
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this made me smile. makes me think of a few people ive known *rolls eyes* its very honest and short and sweet. i like it. keep it up!

on Jan. 24 2010 at 1:39 pm
kimmycakes GOLD, Monrovia, California
14 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never let love bring u down" also "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb"

wow this is really good i agree with u!!! and i feel the same way about my precious jerk lol

on Jan. 22 2010 at 8:04 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

this made me laugh i love it:)

lover hater said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:16 pm
omg this is hot

so cool

its sick

on Jan. 21 2010 at 8:32 am
ThunderLovestheRain SILVER, Brookhaven, Mississippi
9 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't fret when it rains on your parade...just learn to dance in it."

"Be yourself...everyone else is already taken."

"Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes."

Wow...i love how it made me smile when I read it! :p good job!

ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 7:15 pm
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
5 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Giving up doesn’t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. ”

I'm pretty sure I wont

tara said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 12:11 pm
so true, let me know when you find the answer.

on Jan. 20 2010 at 12:02 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reality is almost always wrong."-House

"Don't worry when you feel something, worry when you don't."- SVU

This such an adorable poem! i can relate too! it reminds me of my boyfriend sometimes. i love him though! forever and always. lol. anyways, keep it up. you're amazing at it. XD

on Jan. 19 2010 at 9:27 am
PoetryinMotion329 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
(This is my own quote) " Poetry is a portal into ones mind. An escape from reality. And in this escape we find bliss and understanding...We find ourselves"...

this just might be the most bluntfully true and real poem ive seen in awhile. love the way u captured the emotion. i feel the same about my "precious jerk" lol> great job...

on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:23 pm
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
35 articles 29 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

soooo good (:

truelove GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:11 pm
truelove GOLD, Mansfield, Ohio
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I loved it. you did a great job. keep going.

on Jan. 17 2010 at 7:45 pm
LuLu95 PLATINUM, Denver, Colorado
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Oooh! Dark matter, we better bring a flashlight!"

this is so amazing :) i love it

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:13 pm
kelseaanne BRONZE, Shingle Springs, California
1 article 1 photo 1 comment
great. very relatable, i can bet just about every girl out there has been there dont that. (serveral times too)

good work(:

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:01 pm
innocence BRONZE, San Jose, California
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"heres a lie i wish were true; i really really hate you too"

too cute =)

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 7:43 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

I love this it reminds me so much of the guy that i like right now so im sure a bunch of people can relate to this

Pillow BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 6:47 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
1 article 5 photos 300 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

I like this one. The picture is purfect for it too. I know so many guys like that. You can't with em but can't live without em.

5 stars.

cass said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 3:51 pm
i completely loved this poem. i relate too : ) you are great and you captured everything in one poem congrats!!!!