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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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AmandaH said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 10:02 pm:
Wow. That was totally amazing. It reminds me of the guy I'm in love with. You're very realistic.
 
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ilovekona96 said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 2:42 pm:
I love how realistic the piece is. You can really develope a picture in your head of a person you know that fits the description. Thanks for writing such a wonderful poem.
 
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kapana said...
Dec. 2, 2009 at 12:37 pm:
haha i totally get it...i agree with hurricane, you just described what im dealing with
 
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Hurricane said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 10:13 am:
i agree with smileitscaroline.
you just completely described my situation. hahaha, thanks,=.
 
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SmileitsCaroline This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 10:35 pm:
so true..
i think you've just completely described what's going on in my life right now. i love it
 
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SamiD1 said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 8:54 pm:
i honestly realy like this poem...like a lot
 
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moon&sun said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 7:39 pm:
thats awsome!
 
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MusicInMyHeart<3 said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 6:28 pm:
This is such an amazing poem. If I had tried to describe that...well I just couldn't. But it's so relatable and simple. It's awesome. I love it.
 
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writergirl22 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 5:42 pm:
awesome! i love it
 
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kjroberts said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 5:14 pm:
this is the exact way i feel. like, dead exact. the guy can be such a 'jerk' haha, but i just love him.
i especially like the part that goes 'you know i do' that stanza:)
 
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Katie.T. said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 5:13 pm:
Awesome job! We all can relate, in some way! Thanks for sharing and I am looking forward to reading more of you wonderful poems.
 
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*(B*i*a*n*A)* said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 3:19 pm:
hey nice one i like it!
 
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ChowD This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 3:17 pm:
this is funnay :]
smooth rythm... good jobb!
 
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miz lashae said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 1:56 pm:
i lyk totaly luv dispoem lyk so murch lolz i felt the same way about my ex
 
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j@zz!3 d@ b@dd3$t said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 1:02 pm:
This poem is so true someone always falls in love with some dumb jerk and i've done it plenty of times but thats how you learn!!!!u have to learn from your mistakes and i have and its made me stronger!!! <3
 
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CraziiBunny said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 10:50 am:
omg don't amke me cry this is all so tryue
 
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Showchoir2012 said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 9:29 am:
oh my goodness its so true....
 
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Morgaine3 said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 8:50 am:
Thats so true.... I love it.
 
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shywriter said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 7:51 am:
this was an amazing poem! Love it <3
 
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natalie said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 12:37 am:
incredible :)
 
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