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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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bmmswm said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 10:35 am
why is your poem have lots of love?

bmmskh said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 10:34 am
that is so sweet and true

BMMSTM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:00 am
very true great writing style too! i loved it, i can really tell how you felt when you wrote this!

BMMSSM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:00 am
aw how sweet! it reely says somthin!

on Feb. 26 2010 at 10:37 pm
artfromtheheart BRONZE, Sharon, Massachusetts
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Can you read mine? The link is http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/180406/Everybit-Makes-A-Difference/
Btw, amazingg job! luv it

on Feb. 26 2010 at 10:25 pm
kmpoetgirl7 PLATINUM, Phillips, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"You must be in control of the authorship of your own destiny. The pen that writes your life story must be held in your own hand." Irene C. Kassorla

wow, it's like i can feel the emotion being poured out onto the page! That's amazing! Great job.

Ashly SILVER said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 8:32 pm
Ashly SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
9 articles 1 photo 16 comments
i agree with you who cares if they are beautiful as long as they treat you right.

on Feb. 26 2010 at 5:13 pm
booksareemysanctuary BRONZE, Yonkers, New York
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reading is like my own portal into another world."

great writing. keep up the good work! :)

on Feb. 26 2010 at 5:09 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

i luvv this! so deep & i luv the emotionz u put into it. plz keep writing

BayleyButton said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 4:02 pm
So true. [: This is really good! My favorite so far on this website. But the again I haven't read much here. [:

slrocker777 said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:11 pm
slrocker777, McKinney, Texas
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Great poem, I could really sense the feeling you were giving off in it.

on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:02 pm
victoria96 BRONZE, Mckinney, Texas
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i love this it is soo true sometimes good work :)

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:36 am
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

This poem is okay, I liked the precious jerk line, that was very different and unique. I think I'd be able to relate to it better if I had a precious jerk!! But the writing was very well done and I really liked this poem! Check out mine too!! Good luck and keep writing!

on Feb. 26 2010 at 9:32 am
alwayswriting14 SILVER, Northport, New York
7 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything makes sense yet nothing makes sense."

You captured my own feelings in poetry- it's all right there. Man, am i stupid.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 6:33 pm
AnnaNana PLATINUM, Corinth, Mississippi
20 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live the way you die- All of a sudden: That's the way to go.

hey you commented on my article Prayers for a Football Player and asked me to check out your stuff sorry it took me so long but i really liked it your a very good writer

on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:47 pm
fuzzybootsrawr BRONZE, New York, New York
1 article 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"beauty is in the eye of the beholder"

i hate jerks even if they are beautiful i like em nerdy and sweet

guzpacho said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 8:02 am
guzpacho, Gary, Indiana
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having a stupid jerk of my own abuses meh mentaly and just a few days ago i let hem go, and so for my own personal stupid jerk good ridence!!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 3:05 pm
RainieLee BRONZE, Fremont, California
1 article 0 photos 21 comments
Everybody loves a stupid, beautiful jerk. ;) Wish I had one for myself right now.

on Feb. 20 2010 at 3:20 pm
besticanbe SILVER, Edison, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no substitute for hard work."
-Thomas A. Edison

creative and funny. good job

Alanna SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 6:51 am
Alanna SILVER, Jeffersonville, Indiana
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I love the part when you wrote"you precious jerk"